Slipstreamer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Birfday Dnb Remix!!]

Lol

I can't leave a serious review on this, I just can't.
So I say to you now sir, lol.

Quarl responds:

Happy birthday!

[Affliction (DnB Theme)]

Hmm

This is good but need more?

The bass is cool but its kinda light.
The whole songs kinda light but still pretty phat.
What you have here is awesome but it needs a break down or something.
The strings are fucking epic.

Good:

1) Those pizzy-like strings <3

2) Bass is good but like I said kinda light.

3) That gatey effect at 0:10 is awesome.

4) The mastering is pretty good, the song is pretty smooth all around level wise.

5) The composition is good, it all flows pretty well, love the bass break downs.

6) Hmmm... something else... I forgot :3

Bad:

1) Could use some drum fills

2) The mixing is good in general standards but I think the drums we just a bit low volume wise (but I'm a drum man, I usually have loud drums lol)

3) Its great but need some awesome breakdown with alternate melodies and new sounds and stuff. Like I said, you have small bass break downs but I mean a whole breakdown bit.

4) The bass sound what kinda too uhhh... fuck... I forgot the word for it... haven't produced in a long time lol

4/5 - This song is good but needs a breakdown or something like that added in somewhere and... louder drums? >:D

Leave me a return review? :3

I don't upload of my good tracks to Newgrounds anymore just fuck around 5 minute ones but still lol.

[MH16: Battle Within]

Lol

This is good but the mastering kinda sucks and it doesn't really sound like DnB.
The intro is ok kinda strong though.
The lead is nice but its not a DnB sounding lead lol.
The drums are good.
The arp is good but again, trance.

Good:

1) The drums have a good pattern, samples kinda suck though.

2) The strings are ok but they also have a lame pattern.

3) Leads pretty awesome but not DnB.

4) That BG bass thing sounds good, can't really hear it right now, no headphones.

5) Arp is ok but not DnB -_-

Bad:

1) Sounds like a freakin trance song

2) Mixing kinda sucks

3) Mastering kinda sucks

3/5 - This songs good but its to indecisive on its genre for me haha
You should make it a high-energy trance song instead ;)

[Nav - Zdarkness]

Hmmmmmmm

Your stuff is too weird for me lol.
And yes, I do have somewhat of an opinionated based review style.
That's what leaving a good review is all about, deal with it.

Ok so the intro starts kind of trancy, that wide sounding bass is ok but its weird.
Then it gets like electro breakbeat ish then it gets trancish again...
Then that low sine-line square thing comes in and that's cool I guess.
Acid Arp thing is ok but kind of random and weird/gets to high for me.
Hoovers are good but annoying lol.
That instrumental-like bit in the middle (starting at around 1:50) is nice.
That phat sounding organ thing is cool.
The kick's DB is kinda too high though.
The low frequency? bgish square is a nice add.
Like how it picks up from there until that bit stops then that weird and annoying acid sound comes in lol.

Good:

1) Squares, love your squares. Squares, squares, squares.

2) Main drums are neat.

3) FX are good but kind of weak.

4) Phat organ is cool.

5) The instrumental-like breakdown/build up in the middle is nice.

Bad:

1) Kick's DB is overpowering at times.

2) Acid Arp thing gets too high for my tastes at times.

3) Kind of a random song besides that middle part.

4) Intro is like really trancy or something idk.

5) Arp's melodie is annoying, you use it way to much.

3/5 - Meh, this is good but I don't care much for it.

Don't leave me some smart ass response just take the damn criticisms. I don't care if this will help you improve on your stuff or not lol, its my opinion.

Kind of a shitty review I know, I'm tired as fuck.

Nav responds:

Good reviews are not completely about opinions.

Anyway thanks for reviewing. You probably don't want to hear my response anyway, as it "this song is older, I've gotten better since then".

[XD - Memories]

GOD DAMNIT NAV

SERIOUSLY DUDE YOUR PISSING ME OFF HERE LOL, MAKING YOUR OWN F**KING DRUMS FOR ONCE >:O

Good:

1) Has an okay feel but its kinda trancy all around lol (besides the amen)

Bad

1) Meh, I don't care much for this :X

3/5 - Would have been great with different samples and different sounds
GOD
DAMNIT
NAV
YOU
NOOB
<3

Exxdee responds:

SERIOUSLY DUDE WTF ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?

You don't care for it because you don't know the style of music. Listen to more oldskool freeform and stop leaving reviews based on personal taste. This review hasn't helped me to improve at all. Thanks. - Nav

Hey! You forgot about me >: (
Also,you forgot that the amen break is essential in songs of this genre - chim

[Rig & Spawn - 16 Bar Assassin]

Lol love the ending

Random use of the word n***a are what make up good rap songs

Good:

1) Almost everything...

Bad:

1) Cant criticise right now bout to leave

Good song lol

[(skyline)]

Haha

I still have the FLP for this >:P
You need to sign on AIM more you college jerkwad ;O

Good:

1) Like everything except some of the presets, preset n00bs :D

Bad:

2) No breakdown or climax really

[=[0con]= Night Life]

It's good

Pretty decent song but it needs work of course ;)

Good:

1) Intro is pretty good, like the effects and strings and whatnot.

2) Lead is good but kind of annoying after a while. Mix up that melodie, add some fills, alternates and stuff, don't just use the same melodie for the whole song.

3) The effects are overall good

Bad:

1) Doesn't really go anywhere, although there is some diversity like slow-downs/speed-ups and that pad break at 2:31 which is good.

2) Drum samples kind of suck, try and download/make better ones.

3) Gets boring with just one melodie. Like I said earlier, try to add an alternate melodie, complementing melodie or at last a variation of the melodie.

4) Something else, but I forgot, must not be that important lol

3/5 - Decent song but needs more melodie diversity.

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Thanks,
Slipstream Productions - Sam

0con responds:

I was usin' FL 5 with nothin' but presets buddy.

[Mystical Beauty]

It's okay

This is a great start but its got some problems.

Good:

1) The flute or string thing, whatever that is, its nice.

Bad:

1) The intro, the piano is good but it clips and fades out it doesn't flow. For example, everytime the pettern repeats or something new is added to it stops and repeats/plays, it doesn't flow.

2) The choir is okay but its kind of funky for my tastes, it also comes in kind of suddenly. Try to add some kind of transition.

3) The bells are nice but kind of off beat.

3/5 - Good start for something that could be great

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And don't forget to leave a review or two on something of mine if you have time.

Thanks,
Slipstream Productions - Sam

DDgeek84 responds:

Hmmm... yes, I thought the choir came in kinda strong, though I don't know how I would transition into that.... you know, short of making it longer.... which I don't really feel like doing at the moment... I'm already working on something else, though... something ...happier. And it's a bit off because... I turned off the metromone. I hate the metronome. It's terrible. clickclickclickclickclick.... meh. Oh well, next one should be better. Thanks for your commentary! :D