It's good
Good little song you've got here, needs some more stuff though.
Good:
1) The intro was good, although the drums could have came in better.
2) That arpy sounding lead that comes in is neat.
3) The bass is good but kind of basic and could use a little bit of variety pattern wise.
Bad:
1) The mastering is ok but everything is kind of too soft.
2) The mixing is like terrible, the bass sounds louder then the lead, the drums are louder then everything.
3) The outro is just... horrible lol, AT LEAST do a fade out or something haha.
4) Needs something more, like a breakdown or a main beat or something.
3/5 - Good song but needs work mixing/mastering wise. Also you should add more to this because it's a good start and it has some potential.
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