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[8bit Slutliga Förlorarnas Elit]

Haha

This tune is addicting.
Awesome stuff man.
*Writes swedish crap*
\8bit/

Dimoria responds:

Sug min kuk Cp.

[Fabriken Som Aldrig Stänger]

Maybe I'll add you...

If you sing some songs in fucking english.
Asshole.
Awesome stuff.
lol.

Dimoria responds:

Then fucking become Bilingual dipshit.

[(WF1) April 1st Death threat]

Lol

Your Asian voice and dialogue needs work.
Pretty good besides that. :P

wyldfyre1 responds:

lol the fact the dialogue wasn't perfect is pretty much half the joke ^_~ glad ya laughed.

[My impression of my girlfriend]

YES!

Sounds like someone gargling balls or a knocked up turkey.
Awesome.

themanthelegend responds:

I know it. Imagine having to listen to that everyday.

[-:YRX:-ChaozPhantasy RMX]

Meh

I'm not even going to bother to leave a long review on this...

But my short summary would be:

Composition sucks, mastering sucks, mixing sucks, and... amen break?
Meh.

Has some potential but you did it all wrong.

3/5

YouriX responds:

Okay i guess i should summary also :P

Well by saying you hate the composition you insulted Envy but also me >:(

Second mastering? what are talking about?

Third I spend a lot of time mixing and EQing the song and there is no clear shot or a one way style to mix songs. Music is subjective.

Fourth whats so bad about the amen break? I sliced it added the hihat and also humanized them.

But i guess i cant make evreybody happy huh? But i have to give it to ya you might be right i dont know but will see. I guess you had a hard day reviewing peoples songs? I dont know.. But a advice to you if your going to review other peoples songs point out the good first and slowy introduce the negative. I myself wont make a big deal out of this but other people might.
thanks for the comment by the way

[Bad Trip]

Bout to leave a long fucking review here son.

This is defiantly a good start man but needs so much more.

The whole thing is more like two intros, there isn't really a hardcore dubsteb alle breve drum break down like most dubstep tracks.

The intro needs more then just the drums, it needs something to fill it.
- Maybe a pad or maybe something like a soft, short and stubby sub-bass.

There needs to be some transition into that bass, although I like its smooth and wobbly feel.
It has good fills as well.

The whole track needs some more noise, it's generally empty all around.

Drums need a fuck ton of work.

On your main break down, after the intro, you need to add another REAL breakdown, stronger drums, and a reese.

Your composition also lacks, it's missing way too much parts, is repetitive, and needs a breakdown like before.

I also don't really like the effects used, their kind of random and don't really add to the feel either.

Like how you dropped the bass out on the double kick pattern.

The outro sucks, lol.

The mixing needs work, the song is weak.

The mastering is great.

Good:

1)
The intro is good but needs more.
- Ideas listed above.

2)
The bass is really smooth and wobbly, I love it and its fills.
- Although it needs a back up with a main break down.

3)
Mastering was like perfect.
- Sounded so smooth.

4)
Drums need work, but they did add to the feel of the current song.

Bad:

1)
Composition, theres no breakdown or halfstep break down, also the outro sucks.

2)
Mixing, the sounds didn't fuse too great.

4/5:
I'd love to do a remix of this, I'd pimp it out so much haha.
Send me the raw files if your cool with it.

Check my shit too,
SSP - Sam

Crim responds:

fuck, i appreciate the feedback man...bless

[[LK] My Fantasy [WiP]]

Oh god

You're the next DJ-Nate

Oh sweet jesus, fuck ton of crits, again, lazy.

LK412 responds:

How about next time you leave a review, and say that there is a bunch wrong with it, just tell me instead of saying ur lazy. Don't bother reviewing if you aren't going to ever tell me...

[[LY] Simply Bass!]

Hmm

I'm not sure if this is a serious submission (didn't sound like you went all out on it) so I'm not going to leave a really long review but whatever here goes:

Well this is neat but for the higher notes you need to replace the bass with a hoover or grinder and it would be sick.

You could also use some gated (and/or modulated) fills for the bass and if you added a hoover or grinder you'd need one for that too.

Drums are pretty slick :P

Good:

1)
Bass
- Needs fills and shit though

2)
Drums

Bad:

1)
Mixing or mastering is kinda bad, sound kinda mushes and fuzzes up at higher volumes.

2)
Meh, screw this.

4/5:
This is kinda hard to leave a serious review on but its pretty neat ^_^

la-yinn responds:

Haha, I really appreciate your detailed review even though you're perceptive enough to see this wasn't a serious submission. :p

And you gave me a little idea that I'm going to try out. Instead of adding other higher frequency synths, I might add other basslines with all sorts of cutoff and resonance envelopes. Lets see if it works, hehe.

Thanks a bunch for the review!

[Nav - The Chimes (NG Edit)]

Hmm

Well this is alright and I like it so I'm about to leave a serious review for it...
(I NEVER leave serious reviews, consider yourself lucky and PREPARE TO LEARN!)

I would have arranged and composed this much differently, adding a much more powerful build and some low frequency sub-bass/reese thing that comes in with a better kick-in.

If I was to remix this it would be way more powerful over all and probably peak mastered.

The whole track needs something more to it though, its all kind of empty and thin/un-full sounding.
- Theres a better word for what I'm describing here I just can't think of it.

The kick-in is ok but ehh, could have done better there.
- I don't like how you buzzed it either, thats more of a Trance thing IMO.

Good:

1)
Has a dark, "ominous" and somewhat jungle-like feel, if you were going for this, then you did good, if you weren't, then you fail.

2)
Intro and post-breakdown chimes are good.
- They really create the feel I was talking about above, that and the strings/pads.

3)
Intro drums were good.
- They really fit well with the song

4)
Main drums were nice and punchy
- The punchiness Is good for this kind of feel IMO.
- I like em.

5)
Breakdown at 1:26 was real nice, would have added a stronger and slightly different bass though.
- It was good but didn't have much energy.
- Like I said above whole song is kind of thin and un-full sounding.

6)
That low frequency watery-like arp in the background that comes in at 0:42.
- Really adds to the feel I described above.

7)
I like how you had 2 sets of samples for the intro drums, one for the loop and one for the build.
- This type of variety is good in drum 'n bass.

8)
The strings/pads in the background in the intro and after the breakdown are dark and creepy and add to the feel described above.

9)
Like that half-time drum breakdown you did after the main breakdown.
- I love breakdowns like these.

10)
Like how you did that bit after the break down, it really slow downs good.
- I wouldn't have started the hat back up then faded it out though.
- ^ this makes people think there will be a second break down then pisses them off when theres a shitty fade-out.
- ^^ If not for the time about to end and the volume already in its first phase of fading-out I would have thought there was another breakdown coming.

11)
The mastering is pretty good, it has a smooth feel to it.
- I like this.

12)
The mixing is good as well, the sounds all fuse really well.
- Good job with this.

13)
The composition is good, the song flows well.
- Like I said though, I would have done it slightly different and with a different build.

[14]
Just not noticed that sub-bass playing in the breakdown, fits well and fills the reese good.
- This is good, adds mass to the breakdown and supports the song overall.

Bad:

1)
Your drum fills were pretty lame, but they did fit the somewhat un-powerful and un-energized feel the song had.
- I don't like them though.

2)
Your builds were short, weak and had a somewhat Trance-like feel with the buzz of the kick notes at the end (or climax) of the build.
- That really dissapointed me.

3)
As I have stated a lot before, the song is really thin and pretty un-full/weak all around.
- Had potential to be really great, and I could see this being 10/10 for sure.

4)
Outro was shitty of course. (I think you knew this when you made it lol)
- A punchy-like and un-expected outro with would have probably fit better with this song.

5)
As I said before, the hats starting before the sound fades out is probably not smart because it confuses the kind of tricks and disappoints the listener.

4/5:

I originally was gonna give this song a 3/5 / 7/10 but after listening to it more throughly and several times I decided it was well worth what I am giving it now.

I would love to/probably will remix this later.

I would write a bit more but unfortunately I have used all my characters.
*cries*

Nav responds:

Bads:
1) I agree. It was a pretty half-assed effort, so yes, I didn't spend time on the drum fills.

2) Hm, I never thought of a kick-fill as being trance-like, but I guess I can reconsider. Once again, I agree with this bullet: it was, as I stated, half-assed :P

3) Yeah, I knew from the beginning that it was missing something. I wasn't sure what, it just detracts, know what I mean?

4) Hahaha, I just did a fadeout because I'm too lazy to do a real outro.

5) Hm didn't think of that, I guess it's true though. I can take em out.

Thanks for the review ;), I'll send the files over AIM if you want to remix.

[Gayshit Remix 2]

OMG

EARGASM.

Conal responds:

RESPONSEGASM.